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2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

发布时间:2013-05-15 17:39浏览次数:2193
要求:
微笑,能沟通人与人之间的友情,消除人与人之间的隔阂,使人们相处得更融洽;微笑, 是一个人的表情,也是一种语言,能给他人以鼓励,能给自己带来自信… …请你以Learn to smile为题,写一篇至少80词的短文。
注意:
1. 短文须包括所有内容要点,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等有关信息。
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。

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Hello,everyone. Recently,Chinese dream is a very popular topic all over our country.Everybody has his own dream.Everybody takes about his dream.Of course I have a dream too. Now,let me tell you something about it.My dream is to have a new house.As we all know,it is too expensive to buy a house at present.And its price seems to arise much higher in the future.I hardly afford it but I really want to have it.If I have a house,it means I have a full family.I can give my son a better place to live and grow up.I can make my wife happy.I can invite my friends to have some fun in my house.I can do everything I want in my own world. Altough it is a difficult thing,it is not impossible.It inspires me to work harder and harder.I'll try my best to achieve my dream and I believe there is one day it will be come true .

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