题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇积累还有很大进步空间;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;全文结构较为严谨。
With the development of the technique,the computers are making so useful in our life that the man couldn't live with them. There is no argument for the contribution of computers to the human.When people work, make employments or play,the computers accompany people as their shadow.Computers help people increase their value and make so many things which people do are hard. As another aspect,due to the computer,the people lost many things.People usually play mobile phones instead of play together with their friends.The computers make the communication over people close but people are more remote.