题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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as we known,there is a saying that :"believe in yourself is the most important step to the success" and i want to say:"keeping trust with each other as important as believe self" there are many reasons to prove that,and the following is my thinks. first of all,trust short the distance between we and our friends.And most of us need help some times,at that time ,our friends will give us power,believe we trust them and they will heip we out of the difficult as long as they can.Of course,we should on manitaining trust our friends. the second,because we trust our friends so we can share somethings with them.we can tell them what had happend in our life and what we thought of something about life and so on.Also they will say something funny or sad.we talked,and we put press of life or work out ,we can tell anything that we want to talk,I think that would be a good for any of us. besides,on manitaining trust will create us a harmony envioronment.if we always thinks how to keep distance with others ,then our life would be in a dark. So we should keep trust with others and make us live in the benethe of blue sky.