作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Playing football is my favourite. I fell in love with it by chance. One day, i found a football on my way home. I was so curious about this little round ball that i began to play it with my friends. From then on, i often play football with my classmates after class. We often train ourselves and compete in football games to improve our skills. Among all the football stars, i admire Beckham most. It's not just his handsome appearance but also his wonderful skill that impress me a lot. My great dream is to become a professional football player in the future.