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I have a very good friend name Rose,wo often stay tegether,she is very friendly.Rose is a beautiful girl ,with high tall ,black hair ,big eyes and always smile.She like singing,dancing,drawing,swimming and ping-pang.She is poupular in school and family. She often help me when I have been in trouble.She is a true friend for me. I like her.