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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(63)写作:期末考试

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:00浏览次数:638
要求:

很多学校在临近期末考试时,将体育课改成语数外等“主课”课程。对此老师和学生有不同的观点,请根据表格提示,谈谈你的看法。


Teacher's idea
1.Time is limited.
2.Knowledge is life
3.The grades are important.


Your ideas


注意:
1.       开头部分已写好,不计入总词数。
2.       所写内容必须包括表格中老师的观点和你的至少三个观点。

3.       词数:80个左右。


In many schools, the PE class will be replaced by Chinese, math or English before the final exam.___________________________________________________________________

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Fine on my way home on the bus,I saw a boy who is about ten year old got on the bus with his grandfather. The old man took his grandson's schoolbag and violin.I thought it is heavy,so I stood up from my seat at once,and invited the old man to take my seat.It was surprised me that the little boy sat down very quickly,and he didn't care about his grandfather at all.Moreover,the boy asked for some water,the old man gave him a bottle of water.After drank up it,the boy littered the empty bottle on the bus. This thing is worth thinking.In my opinion,the children are supposed to not only respect the elder but also take care of them.Especially his own grandfather and grandmother.Besides,we should keep the environment clean.It is good for everybody's health as well as yourself's.

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