题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
Nowadays, Computers are becoming more and more widely used in our daily life. People tend to do everything with computers. In fact, computer is a good helper in releasing some labour work of human beings. We have to learn high technology if we want to make good use of them. However, there are always drawbacks in the process. Some criminals do crimes with computers. In addition, things like compter games can make children indulged in it instead of concentrating on their study. In my opinion, if we want to make good use of computers, we have to obey some made rules in case we lose ourselves. All in all, I think man can not live a better life without computers, and if we want to be successful in the future, we have to think twice about the best way to utilize this kind of high-tech machine.