正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Do you know Ray?Yes, he is my best friend.He is a clever boy.His favourite subject is maths.And he can play piano well.In the school,he alwasys plays with me.And we are very happy.Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a gift for him to give he a surprise.I think he will happy.