文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Do you know Ray?He is my best friend.He is a clever boy.His favourite subject is maths.And he can play the piano well.In the school,he always plays with me.And we are very happy.Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a gift for him to give he a surprise.I think he will happy.