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Do you know Ray?He is my best friend.He is a clever boy.His favourite subject is maths.He can play the piano well.And he can play football too.In the school,he always plays with me.We are doing some sport.Such as football basketball baseball and so on.So we are very happy.Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a gift for him to give he a surprise.I think he will happy.