小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Do you know Tom?He is my best friend. He is a clever boy.So his favourite subject is maths.He can not only play the piano but also play the violin.In the school,he always plays with me.We are doing some sports.Such as swimming running jumping and so on.So we are very happy.Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a gift for him to give he a surprise.I think he will happy.