小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much. Do you know Tom?He is my best friend. Due to he is a clever boy.So his favourite subject is maths.He can not only play the piano but also play the Sun.He played the piano at the concert in the The National Grand Theater on the April first 2015.I think his performance is just good.I am proud with him. Especially he is frequently ready to help others.He is passionate too. Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised.I think he is happy. I am looking forward to playing well with him.He will become my lasting throughout life friend.