小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

Do you know Tom?He is my best friend. Due to he is a clever boy.So his favourite subject is maths.He can not only play the piano but also play the Sun.He played the piano at the concert in the The National Grand Theater when he was six.I think his performance is just good.I am proud with him. Especially he is frequently ready to help others.He is passionate too. Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised.I think he is happy. I am looking forward to playing well with him.He will become my lasting throughout life friend. Do you know Tom?He is my best friend. Due to he is a clever boy.So his favourite subject is maths.He can not only play the piano but also play the Sun.He played the piano at the concert in the The National Grand Theater when he was six.I think his performance is just good.I am proud with him. Especially he is frequently ready to help others.He is passionate too. Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised.I think he is happy. I am looking forward to playing well with him.He will become my lasting throughout life friend.