小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；文章层次较为清晰。

My Friend Sally is my best friend. She is a girl. Both of us are good at English, so we often talk in English in our spare time. After school, we often do homework together. When we are playing, she runs so fast that I cannot catch up with her. She is an excellent student. She likes pop and classical music. Her dream is to become a teacher. I love my friend Sally.