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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36980
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Pronunciation. Pronunciation is a funny thing. What pronunciation do you study? In England there are a hundred different accents but textbooks only teach one. What use is that? Actually, English teaching textbooks are pretty bad at teaching pronunciation. Look how many exercises there are - very few. And most of the exercises only teach one tiny point of pronunciation - word stress. And they do not even show that the stress on a word changes in different sentences. I think pronunciation is very interesting. I wish all teachers used the phonemic symbols in every class. At least students could then improve their pronunciation with their dictionary. The most important thing about pronunciation is intonation, but few teachers teach this.

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