小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

I’m in Class3 Grade1.Li Nan is my best friend. She’s thirteen years old. Her birthday is on October 3rd and she was born in Shen Zhen. She lives with her family in Haimen. She’s 1.60 metres tall. She is very lovely and lively. She likes eating vegetables,fruits,chocolate,and fish.She dislikes pork, sweets and green tea. She loves listening to music. She has lots of CDs. She likes reading and writing. She is the newest member of the Maths Club. She has many hobbies, such as dancing, running and playing computer games. Her favorite hobby is drawing, because she likes all the different colors. It is fun to look at the pictures when she finishes drawing them. The Dragon Boat Festival is her favorite day. She wants to be a doctor when she grows up. We always have fun. We sit under the trees at lunchtime and have a good chat. Sometimes, we buy snacks from the tuck shop. On Sunday, we usually go to the bookshop. We often study together. My best friend is really great!