2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(63)写作:期末考试

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Fine on my way home on the bus,I saw a boy who is about ten year old got on the bus with his grandfather. The old man took his grandson's schoolbag and violin.I thought it is heavy,so I stood up from my seat at once,and invited the old man to take my seat.It was surprised me that the little boy sat down very quickly,and he didn't care about his grandfather at all.After a while,the boy shouted at his grandpa for some water,the old man gave him a bottle of water.When he drank up the water,the boy threw away the empty bottle on the bus. This thing is worth thinking about.In my opinion,the children are supposed to not only respect the elder but also take care of them.Especially his own grandfather and grandmother.Besides,we should keep the environment clean.It is good for everybody's health as well as yourself's.