小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Do you know Tom?He is a lovely and lively boy.He comes from Shanxi province,We study in Yatai primery school Class3 Grade1.We are deskmate too. He likes much food,such as vegetables,fruits,chocolate,and fish.nonetheless pork, sweets and green tea not.He has many hobbies, such as dancing,reading and playing the computer games. Due to he is extremely clever.Accordingly he is crazy about maths.He can not only play the piano but also play the Sun. He thinks it is fun to play the musical instrument. He played the piano at the concert in the The National Grand Theater when he was six. I consider his performance is just extraordinary.I am proud with him. Especially he is frequently ready to help others.Furthermore he is passionate too. Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised. I am looking forward to playing well with him.He will become my lasting throughout life friend.