小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

My new deskmate is a boy of sixteen. His name is Zhang Gao. He is 1.8 meters tall. His strongly-built body and sun-tanned skin make him look like a sportsman. He has two big dark eyes under a pair of thick eyebows. It seems that they are always smiling at you. Compared with my yellow hair, his hair is black and thick. He speaks a little bit fast but very clearly. However, he likes to gesture from time to time while he's talking. He has a dream of becoming a famous actor one day. I believe his dream will come true because of his handsome face and well-developed figure.