小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

Last week, Tom,a friend of mine came to visit me, I felt so surprised, because we lose touch for many years. Did you know Tom? He was a lovely and lively boy. he was my classmate when I was in primary school, now five years has passed, both of us have entered college. My friend told me that he was doing a research, he remembered my home address, so he came to visit me. We talked many things in primary school,and it was a beautiful memory, both of us were naughty at that time, but we loved sport, we played basketball match and won the first place. When the time he left, we made the deal to gather for the next time.