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作者词汇量积累不错，高级词汇积累较少；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；全文结构较为严谨。
Do you know Tom?He is a lovely and lively boy.He comes from Shanxi province.We study in Yatai primery school Class3 Grade1.We are deskmate too. He likes much food,such as vegetables,fruits,chocolate,and fish.nonetheless pork, sweets and green tea not.He has many hobbies, such as dancing,reading and playing the computer games. Due to he is extremely clever.Accordingly he is crazy about maths.He can not only play the piano but also play the Sun. He thinks it is fun to play the musical instrument. He played the piano at the concert in the The National Grand Theater when he was six. I consider his performance is just extraordinary.I am proud with him. Especially he is frequently ready to help others.Furthermore he is passionate too. Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised. I am looking forward to playing well with him.He will become my lasting throughout life friend. Last week, a friend of mine came to visit me, I felt so surprised, because we lose touch for many years, he was my classmate when I was in primary school, now five years has passed, both of us have entered college. My friend told me that he was doing a research, he remembered my home address, so he came to visit me. We talked many things in primary school,and it was a beautiful memory, both of us were naughty at that time, but we loved sport, we played basketball match and won the first place. When the time he left, we made the deal to gather for the next time.
