采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强。
Friends are important for us, everyone has their own friends, we share sorrow and happiness with our friends. We is making new friends now and then, but it is hard to find the genius friends, the trust between friends are hard to build. If the trust exists, friends can talk anything, they are willing to show who they are in front of their friends. While if the trust doesn’t exist, the friendship is not real deep, people will ask you when they are in trouble. The real friendship is built on the basis of trust. My best friend will never ask me to do thing all the time, instead, she cares about me, and comforts me when I am upset. That’s a real friend.