英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 小学英语> 一年级英语> 模拟题> 小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36980
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

用户练习作文:

Not everyone is alone in the society, and everyone needs friends. But how to become friends is a important question for us. In my opinion, we can make friends in the following principles. On one hand, be a good listener .Let people talking about what they really want to talk. That you are a good listener means you understand him. On the other hand, be friendly to people. Everyone will be in trouble, so at any time, we should be friendly to people. In this way, you will have a lot of friends. Actually, making friends is a easier job if you put you true heart in it.

会员评论0个评论)
海龟大叔
金币:480

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:84.0倪世超

人气:53发布:2016-05-27

得分:81.5Abby猫

人气:35发布:2014-09-24

得分:80.0shelly163

人气:56发布:2013-07-31

得分:80.0hnxm_numb

人气:75发布:2014-02-11

得分:79.52013100267

人气:42发布:2015-12-16