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Not everyone is alone in the society, and everyone needs friends. But how to become friends is an important question for us. In my opinion, we can become good friends in the following principles. On the one hand, be a good listener.Let someone talking about what they really want to talk. That you are a good listener means you understand him. On the other hand, be friendly to people. Everyone will be in trouble, so at any time, we should be friendly to people. In this way, you will have a lot of friends. Actually, making friends is a easier job if you put you true heart in it.