小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用；文章用词太过单一，文章拼写错误比较多。

my name is Ray.i have a good friend . her name is liu yun. she lives in china . her mather is a singer. she likes swimming. her father is a tv reporter. he likes listening to mnsic. liu yun likes piaying the violin and riding her bike. every morning , she goes to school on foot. every evening, she reads newspaper ai home. then she goes to bed at nine. this is my good friend liu yun.