小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

My good friend is Mei. She’s a girl. She is my classmate. Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in the summer holiday. She likes pink and white. She is in Class Four, Grade Six with me. She usually goes to school by motor cycle. Sometimes she goes to school on foot. We often go shopping together on the weekend. We will be good friends forever.