简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;文章层次较为清晰。
verybody has a best friend that they can share everything with.I also have a best friend.We met in school,and we're in the same grade. My best friend is a good student because he is very hardworking.I learn a lot from him.He helps me with math;I help him with English.We always help each other.besides that,he's honest and reliable.I trust him completely and we share secrets all the time. My best friend is also loyal and brave.Once when a bully teased me,he came to my rescue right away.He always remembers my birthday and he is fun to be with.He tells funny jokes and stories.He always makes me laugh.Finally,he is a very good listener and he knows how to cheer me up when I'm down.