小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加几条从句；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

When we have something annoyed us, we will naturally to find someone to talk about it, the first choice is for friends. We will not talk about it in the front of our parents, because we don’t want them to worry about us. Friend is so important in our life, we have many friends, we will share our happiness and sorrow with them, we hang out together, in a word, friends are part of our life. What will happened if someone have no friend? We hear from the news that the crime people are isolated by others, most of them have no friends, their view point about the world is distorted. Without friends, people have no where to relieve their emotion, the long time’s depression of the emotion distract people from the normal life. So friends are very important, we can’t live without friends.