简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
My good friend is Tommy. He is shorter and thinner than me. He’s good at basketball and he likes to eat meat. He likes to play games, too! He is very generous. And sometimes he shares some food with me and lends me some books. He is very strong. He lives in Xiangshan so he is good at swimming. He sometimes doesn’t do his homework after class so he has to do his homework in the evening. We are friends so I accompany him to do it. We get along well though we sometimes fight each other. We are a good pair of friends.