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have one friend.Her name is Sunny.She is very health.She exercise every day.And her eating babits are pretty good.She do not like milk,but she drink it every day.Her mother say that is good for her health.She likes junk food too.But she try to eat less junk food.And she sleeps nine hours every night.So,she is pretty healthy. I have another friend.His name is Mike.He is different from Sunny.He is unhealthy.He hardly ever exercise.And he loves junk food,he eats them three or four times a week.So he things he is unhealthy. Both Sunny and Mike are my friends ,altough they are different.