小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. She’s from America. She’s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She’s lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She’s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English. I’m lucky to have such a good friend.