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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36980
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;文中句子偏简单,可增加从句使用量。

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Today I'd like to tell you sth about my best friend---Mary. She is a beatiful, clever girl. She is ready to help others,whenever others are in trouble. She is brave, outgoing and popular. Last Sunday, she and I went shopping.we are walking on the street, when we saw a little boy crying . we stopped to see what had happened.The boy told me he was lost and couldn't find her mother.we asked him a lot about his family. He couldn't explain clearly. At last we had to send him to the police station. we felt happy. In Mary's spare time, she often helps us learn English. we speak Enlish as often as possible . I find I have improved my English a lot . we are best friends. we can talk everything in the sun . i think a good friend is that we should share happiness and sorrow . Luckily, Mary is such a good friend.

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