句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。
Friends and friendship are important to everyone. We need friends because friendship can make us feel happy and warm. We will always feel lonely if we have no friends. We can do many things with friends, such as playing together and helping each other with study. If you have a pen pal, you can tell him about your hometown and you will know a lot about his city or country. Then both of you can know more. Friends can answer your questions or give you some advice to your problems, and you can also do so. If you make friends, you will get more friendship and your life will be better. So, why don’t you make more friends?