小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Ms Jerry is a foreign teacher. She comes from America. She is thirty-one yearsold. She has fair hair，white skin and gray eyes. She is tall and slim. Shelooks very kind. And in fact，she is kind indeed. Ms Jerry is a good teacher. Although she only comes to our school twice aweek，she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students. Once，she was ill，but she wenton giving us lessons. When we learned this，we all listened to her even more attentively thanusual. Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm：“Each lessonshe will bring us new pictures，new stories，new games and new songs. Her class is always full ofhappy laughter and merry songs. Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.