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Do you know Tom?He is a lovely and lively boy.He comes from Shanxi province.We study in Yatai primery school Class3 Grade1.We are deskmate too. He likes much food,such as vegetables,fruits,chocolate,and fish.nonetheless pork, sweets and green tea not.He has many hobbies, such as dancing,reading and playing the computer games. Due to he is extremely clever.So he is good at maths.And he attachs importance to maths.He can not only play the piano but also play the Sun. He consider it is fun to play the musical instrument. He played the piano at the concert in the The National Grand Theater when he was six. I consider his performance is just extraordinary.I am proud with him. Especially he is frequently ready to help others.He is passionate too. Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised. I am looking forward to playing well with him.He will become my lasting throughout life friend.
