拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
Except for the ugly appearance, he has a beautiful, pure soul, and his innocence doped slightest impurity love guarding Esmeralda, trying to make her away from all harm. Ironically,his father seems to be knowledgeable and moral,on the contrary, he is full of evil desires and scheming especially by all means to reach goals. When he come across Esmeralda,he is obsessed with her beauty,so he compels his adopted son Quasimodo to kidnap her.Luckily, the gypsy girl was saved by the armed escort Chief Phoebus from this conspiracy, obsessed by his handsome appearance, Esmeralda fall in love with him at once.So does Phoebus.In fact,he just for fun.Driving by envious hatred,Frollo stabbed Phoebus then shifts blame for Esmeralda,and threaten her to have to execute her.On the hanging day, she wished her knight could save her,but Phoebus see his interests much worthier than her and thinks Frollo must rescue lovable girl. The worse thing is that Frollo prefers destroying his things that desire but unable to get to fightting for it.This is Frollo,selfish,arrogant, sanctimonious,only solely focus on his individual benefit.