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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；作者在句法层面做的很棒。
Such a kind girl eventually got a sad result,after the only person be most willing to love and protect her know that,pushing Frollo down the the clock tower and putting her down from the scaffold, hugging her in arm and immerse in sorrow. The person is right the ugly, deaf and has many physical deformity called monster--Quasimodo. At this point,the ugliest is the kindest.Compared with the nobles, through they have the most magnificent clothes on, the most delicious food to eat, however, they also have the the dirtiest soul. Their only entertainment is making fun of the people at the bottom of society. Especially, when there is a execute proceeding, they are laughing, cursing,despising even yelling like spending an important festive. How miserable scene it is! Finally,the two in the same boat are together, and it is said that their bodies are found tightly embrace together and into ash when people tried to split they in two years. Though it is a pathetic ending, In anther point of view, they are with each other forever in the other world ---paradise that is full of happiness, such as ha
