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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；作者在句法层面做的很棒。
such as having abundant food to eat not staving any more, having warm houses against cold and loneliness. What is more, there are no evils bullying them longer. They deserve that, because of their noble soul that is rare to see at the time of corrupt society. In contract,evils are doomed to go to hell. After finishing this book,I have many feelings as follow sharing with you.Firstly, we do not judge a person from his appearance,clothes and stuff,because of the ugly appearance, it may be hidden in a fiery pure soul; handsome beautiful face, also buried the disgraceful, despicable distortion of people's minds. all we have to do is learning a person from bottom of heart by talking with him,playing with him,however he is rich or not ,during this time,we maybe found some jerks or some sincere friends.which is found by ourselves not hearing from others with some prejudice at least.It is important to realize and insist on that.Secondly, people living in the world,there must be disappointments,heartaches and loneliness and struggles and pain into our path,at any
