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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足。
After finishing this book,I have many feelings as follow sharing with you.Firstly, we do not judge a person from his appearance,clothes and stuff,because of the ugly appearance, it may be hidden in a fiery pure soul; handsome beautiful face, also buried the disgraceful, despicable distortion of people's minds. All we have to do is learning a person from bottom of heart by talking with him,playing with him,however he is rich or not,during this time,we maybe found some jerks or some sincere friends.which is found by ourselves not hearing from others with some prejudice at least.It is important to realize and insist on that.Secondly, people living in the world,there must be disappointments,heartaches and loneliness and struggles and pain into our path,at any time,we must have positive ideals, goals and
