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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:51浏览次数:6320
要求:
题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用高级词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆。

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we must have positive ideals, goals and human dignity to face and solve it. And it is necessary that have dreams that can support and courage us when we meet with difficulties,then remind us:just fix it.At our age of stage,having kinds of dream and fighting for them, it does not matter that some dreams cannot come true,because we are young that are in a wonderful stage of life,fitting for dreams.Thirdly,we learn to cherish and be thankful for the feelings between people: family, friendship, love…respect for everyone around, and so do not let these wonderful life after the passing away of the bright spots regret. These, in the story who are showing us a thought-provoking negative tragic consequences.At last,I am deeply impressed by the architectural style of Notre Dame-de-Paris.It is completely different from domestic style. Notre Dame is the Claddings unique style, well-structured, looked very solemn and majestic. It was pilasters vertical separation of three large; 3 decorative horizontal band again it is divided into three parts, of which lowermost of three concave openings. Door top of the so-called "King's Gallery" on behalf of Israel and the Jewish history of 28 King sculpture. I am dying for having a look and appreciating the  brilliant cultural atmosphere in the future.

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