采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。
There is no doubt that ghost culture is related to the ghost, for example, Chinese funeral culture and western vampire culture. But the definitions of the word "ghost", are various, such as demon, spirit. As an important part of traditional culture, ghost culture is a kind of worldwide cultural phenomenon. Its formation not only has social and economic reasons, but also has epistemological and psychological basis. Once ghost culture is formed and affected by traditional culture, it will be different from other country’s ghost culture. However, China and western countries has a long history of ghost culture. Chinese and western ghost culture have cognition in common. Although they have great similarities, the difference still exists. And recently, the horror films with the leading role of ghost image, the "ghost" entertainment and ghost story have continuously emerged into the market, which arouses the interest of public and also caters to the tastes of different people from the different classes in society. A study on differences between Chinese and western ghost culture is chosen as the study object, with the aim to study the difference between Chinese and western culture. It not only contributes to correctly learn and understand the feature of ghost culture for the readers, but also helps them with a rational view to see the Chinese and western ghost culture. What’s more, it plays a significant role in the Chinese and western intercultural communication.