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My good friend named kitty.She is a good_looking girl,she has long black hair and big eyes. We always go to school together,and back home together.she is very helpful and warmful. We like each other very much. She likes smile.I often say she is an angle.She helps me many times,my maths is not very good,so she helps my maths,and i helps her chinese.