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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
丰富的使用了长难句；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
with the development of society,more and more people use the computer for communication which make an bad influence on our lives. if we always use the computer for communication,we do not know how to talk with others face to face.and then, use electronic communication all the time ,we can not konw about our families or friends real situation. we do not feel their feelings . as we know , eletronic communication plays an important role in our lives. and mang people can not keep away from it.but it can not repalce face to face contact that is a good way to share more experience and feelings for us to face to face.and build up more intimate relationships.
