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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12931
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章上下文衔接自然。

用户练习作文:

With the development of society,more and more people use the computer for communication which has a bad influence on our lives. If we always use the computer for communication,we do not know how to talk with others face to face.And then, use electronic communication all the time ,we cannot know about our families or friends real situation. We do not feel their feelings. As we know , electronic communication plays an important role in our lives. And many people cannot keep away from it.But it can not replace face to face contact that is a good way to share more experience and feelings with us to face to face.And build up more intimate relationships.

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