作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次较为清晰。
The translucent warmers were I showed you on our meeting 6/18. Since the clay is not steady and easy to get deform, so I have not commended to you for so long time. After many time tries, it is steady now. We can commend this ceramics that put in LED lights to GC. The LED lights source one is cold light source, the other is warm light source. We provide two options to GC for comparison.