2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦154:患难朋友

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The translucent warmers were I showed you on our meeting 6/18. Since the clay is not steady and easy to get deform, so I have not commended to you for so long time. After many times tries, it is steady now. We can commend this ceramics with LED lights to GC. The LED lights source one is cold light source, the other is warm light source. We provide two options to GC for comparison. Because the ceramics shell is too thicker, so the lights is not strong. Our sample team will re-do the sample to send.