拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
The translucent warmers were I showed you on our meeting 6/18. Since the clay is not steady and easy to get deform, so I have not commended to you for so long time. After many times tries, it is steady now. We can commend this ceramics with LED lights to GC. The LED lights source one is cold light source, the other is warm light source. We provide two options to GC for comparison. Because the ceramics shell is too thicker, so the lighting is not strong. Our sample team will re-do the sample to send.