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考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3138
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作文要求:

写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

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300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达较恰当,高级词汇表达灵活。

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People have many opinions about the differences between computers and brains.I think,in conclusion,they can be divide into several aspects as follows. First of all, the former can memorise messages accurately,but the latter have less advantages than them.Then,the volume of the computer is based on hardwares ,so it's limited.However,the brain doesn't have this limitation.Above all,the brain can study and imagine,yet the computer cannot do it well. Therefore,in the modern times,computers can't take place in brains,based on the level of technology at present.However,we can ignore their advantages,offered a majority of convience for our life.

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