2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Computer is already being an indispensable tool in the life of junior, adult, even senior. In the university, students use the computer to finish the report, thesis and Professors use computer to search information and prepare slides. In the office, adults use computer to perfect their projects. At home, housewives use computer watch TV series, movies and news. And seniors can use the computer to connect with friends and relatives. If you have internet, everyone, in the world, can use the computer to see the world you have no choice to touch. Step by step, computer replaces television, telephone, drawing tool, calculation tool. As a result, people can’t write by hand, can’t calculate by mind, don’t have time to meet with other people. People begin to live in their own world. Nowadays, more and more people choose to leave their parents to work or study. They prefer to chat with parents by chatting tool. They consider a lot of excuses which they can’t go back to home. While, parents become older, who hope to stay with their own children and need the help of youngers in their life. Only chatting online can’t reduce their sensor of missing and lonely. Computer helps people in many fields, in the meantime, excessive dependent on computer will lead to loss some abilities and increase the gap among people.