2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

If you see a old man fainted in the street,you will help him or not.I Think a lot of people unwilling do that.Why?Why people become so indifferent?The only reason is that people don't trust anyone. consequently,we should ask ourselves what led the situation going on.There are various factors.We always see some news about some people help others,unfortunately,these people don't obtain others reward replace others cheating.With increasing of phenomenons appease in our daily life,people don't turst others any more. Accordingly,it's significantly serious to deal with this problem.We should keep sincere attitude to communicate with others,everything should strive by ourselves.Only in this way can we have a harmonious society.